Writer's block. The word has always been a vague sort of problem for me. I've heard horror stories but have never really experienced anything like it until recently. Not that my tale is a horror story, it's been, in most part, a large amount of procrastination, pinterest and facebook games. Usually in that order.
I hit a bought of writer's block near the end of NaNoWriMo. I wasn't worried, I'd already surpassed my word goal and validated my novel, but for the life of me I couldn't figure out what happened next. I had the ending of my novel outlined but how to get to where the heroine met up with our wicked sorceress was a mystery. There was a gap I couldn't cross. My Heroine was two kingdoms and at least twenty pages away from where she needed to be to reach her happily-ever-after. The ideas from the next leg of her journey kept falling through. The story I was going to use for inspiration in this area was nowhere to be found in my stacks of books. So I gave up and tried editing for a while until even that was going no where.
Today, almost two weeks later, I've not written a word more, not even opened my document and tried to type a short phrase, but I have the inspiration I needed. I was sitting proctoring a test, a very lucrative if boring job as a cheat deterrent, I watched the test takers for signs of foul-play and thought of my next plot point. Sure it's not all the way to my ending, but it's a step closer.
Somethings fell into place, some ideas bore fruit that just might be even better than what I was looking for. Thank You GOD! I am on my way. And so I must switch gears, and return to my writing.
Good luck to you who are powering on after finishing NaNoWriMo and moving toward the completion of your novel!
P.S. I thought I was good at this stuff, this being my second year and my third book but my sister, Melli, is blowing me out of the water. I am so proud and amazed by her talent. She is the best!!
Sunday, December 14, 2014
Christmas is Just Around the Corner
December all ready?!?! I can't believe it's a little more than a week away from Christmas! We have a fire in the fireplace, a Christmas tree bedecked in my favorite colors and a few dozen cookies to hand out to the neighbors. I hope we don't eat most of them before that can happen.
Presents are on their way to friends and family. I have a few cards to get out, but the first batch is away! One would think we are on the ball this year, but they would be wrong.
Speaking of presents, I thought I'd share my wishlist this year. I've come to realize that what I want really won't fit under my Christmas tree. My wishes are looking a lot like last year's resolutions, but this time I pray they will last longer than January 31st.
Wishlist
1. Health: For my grandmother most of all, but for myself and the rest of my family. We've had some big wake up calls this year, and yet things haven't changed much. I am constantly tired, stressed about finances, the future and wanting to curl up in a ball and sleep through the next ice age.
2. To be debt free. That would mean I have a steady income that is greater than the flow going out each month. Not just for the credit cards and bills, but to pay off my sister's and my student loans. I wonder if I will live to see them paid off, even if I live to be 100. I want to be financially solvent and saving for the future, but that is hard when you don't even have a part time job.
3. Time to finish what I started. Somewhere in this wish is the need for more motivation, energy and free time, not just for my writing but for the dozen or so projects I have around the house. From hanging the towel bar in my bathroom to putting up the shed in the side yard. I just can't seem to follow through. What was put on hold by a bought of procrastination has turned into a matter of me not having enough time or energy to complete.
A thought has just occurred to me, these very vague wished are connected. Health means energy, energy means getting stuff done, debit equal stress which means less energy and less health. It looks a lot lit a mathematical equation. I dislike math. I always make it harder than it needs to be. Does that apply to the answer to this equation, I wonder?
On another note, my sister has come up with a slogan of sorts for this new year, a new mind set if you will. She told me today, we will use what we have. No buying new, no putting it off, which has been out modus operandi. Do it as best you can with what you have, she says. We will be focusing on debit consolidation and elimination. Gifts will be hand made, projects will be completed with the items we've already bought that are scattered around the house.
Truthfully I have everything I need, and then some. What I really need is to do something with it.
Presents are on their way to friends and family. I have a few cards to get out, but the first batch is away! One would think we are on the ball this year, but they would be wrong.
Speaking of presents, I thought I'd share my wishlist this year. I've come to realize that what I want really won't fit under my Christmas tree. My wishes are looking a lot like last year's resolutions, but this time I pray they will last longer than January 31st.
Wishlist
1. Health: For my grandmother most of all, but for myself and the rest of my family. We've had some big wake up calls this year, and yet things haven't changed much. I am constantly tired, stressed about finances, the future and wanting to curl up in a ball and sleep through the next ice age.
2. To be debt free. That would mean I have a steady income that is greater than the flow going out each month. Not just for the credit cards and bills, but to pay off my sister's and my student loans. I wonder if I will live to see them paid off, even if I live to be 100. I want to be financially solvent and saving for the future, but that is hard when you don't even have a part time job.
3. Time to finish what I started. Somewhere in this wish is the need for more motivation, energy and free time, not just for my writing but for the dozen or so projects I have around the house. From hanging the towel bar in my bathroom to putting up the shed in the side yard. I just can't seem to follow through. What was put on hold by a bought of procrastination has turned into a matter of me not having enough time or energy to complete.
A thought has just occurred to me, these very vague wished are connected. Health means energy, energy means getting stuff done, debit equal stress which means less energy and less health. It looks a lot lit a mathematical equation. I dislike math. I always make it harder than it needs to be. Does that apply to the answer to this equation, I wonder?
On another note, my sister has come up with a slogan of sorts for this new year, a new mind set if you will. She told me today, we will use what we have. No buying new, no putting it off, which has been out modus operandi. Do it as best you can with what you have, she says. We will be focusing on debit consolidation and elimination. Gifts will be hand made, projects will be completed with the items we've already bought that are scattered around the house.
Truthfully I have everything I need, and then some. What I really need is to do something with it.
Saturday, November 29, 2014
Thankfulness: 14 Reasons for Me to Give Thanks
In the spirit of Thanksgiving, here are some things that I am thankful for. I have seen a lot of lists of things that other people have made.
There are something things that always appear on these lists.
Family, Friends, Health, Faith, and I am thankful of all of that and a whole lot more. I thought fourteen things for 2014 sounded good. So here I go.
1. An income, though small I still have some.
2. Free Time. I am blessed with free time to work on my writing, crafts, art, etc.
3. Connecting. Spending time with my family and friends. Real time talking to each other, in the same room.
4. No Big Worries. Not having to worry about a lot of things because I know they are in God's hands. He's awesome!
5. Learning. I am thankful that I am still learning. There is something new everyday.
6. Humor. It makes the everyday stuff better.
7. Sleep. Long, uninterrupted sleep. You don't know how important it is until you don't have it anymore.
8. Freedom. We live in the land of the brave and the free. Too often we take that for granted. We think "well if it's free, then it can't be worth much." Or ask "Is it really free?" I know a lot of things are not so Free, (too good to be true and all that), but there is a lot you can do with freedom. Creative ideas, inspiration. Free Thought. Free Speech.
9. Recycling. Reusing what we have in better ways. Not only does it save the environment and keep stuff out of landfills, it helps us break out our creative mojo and think outside the box.
10. Motivation. Sure, it comes from a lot of different sources, in every color, shape and size, but it's important and helps us move along. It is unique for everyone and I have a blast researching things to keep me motivated.
11. Perseverance. The second wind, the last push. I am thankful that I can keep going to get the job done. (Especially when it is something that I really don't want to be doing, but it still needs to get done.)
12. Love. I have never felt unloved. My family, my friends tell me I am loved, and loveable. Share the love.
13. Patience. I am thankful that I am learning patience. It really is something that can be learned, thought often it is a struggle (for me at least).
14. Self-control. I am coming to realize just what this can mean. I am in control of my choices, my thoughts and how I see the world. I am thankful for the fact that I have self-control, and that I can step up to the plate and be accountable for my actions and learn from them. I can learn to use self-control and improve some of the more problematic areas of my life.
So there are my fourteen things to be thankful for.
To all of you, a belated, Happy Thanksgiving.
There are something things that always appear on these lists.
Family, Friends, Health, Faith, and I am thankful of all of that and a whole lot more. I thought fourteen things for 2014 sounded good. So here I go.
1. An income, though small I still have some.
2. Free Time. I am blessed with free time to work on my writing, crafts, art, etc.
3. Connecting. Spending time with my family and friends. Real time talking to each other, in the same room.
4. No Big Worries. Not having to worry about a lot of things because I know they are in God's hands. He's awesome!
5. Learning. I am thankful that I am still learning. There is something new everyday.
6. Humor. It makes the everyday stuff better.
7. Sleep. Long, uninterrupted sleep. You don't know how important it is until you don't have it anymore.
8. Freedom. We live in the land of the brave and the free. Too often we take that for granted. We think "well if it's free, then it can't be worth much." Or ask "Is it really free?" I know a lot of things are not so Free, (too good to be true and all that), but there is a lot you can do with freedom. Creative ideas, inspiration. Free Thought. Free Speech.
9. Recycling. Reusing what we have in better ways. Not only does it save the environment and keep stuff out of landfills, it helps us break out our creative mojo and think outside the box.
10. Motivation. Sure, it comes from a lot of different sources, in every color, shape and size, but it's important and helps us move along. It is unique for everyone and I have a blast researching things to keep me motivated.
11. Perseverance. The second wind, the last push. I am thankful that I can keep going to get the job done. (Especially when it is something that I really don't want to be doing, but it still needs to get done.)
12. Love. I have never felt unloved. My family, my friends tell me I am loved, and loveable. Share the love.
13. Patience. I am thankful that I am learning patience. It really is something that can be learned, thought often it is a struggle (for me at least).
14. Self-control. I am coming to realize just what this can mean. I am in control of my choices, my thoughts and how I see the world. I am thankful for the fact that I have self-control, and that I can step up to the plate and be accountable for my actions and learn from them. I can learn to use self-control and improve some of the more problematic areas of my life.
So there are my fourteen things to be thankful for.
To all of you, a belated, Happy Thanksgiving.
Friday, November 21, 2014
NaNoWrMo Winner!
WINNER!
As of today, writers are able to validate there novels and get the official WINNER badge (digital). As you can guess, I already did. The 50k word goal is mine. I'm still writing, but have also started to edit my novel.
Thanks to my sister's MAC I have my novel read to me as I edit. I have the habit of missing those sneaky words that are not supposed to be there, but are still spelled correctly.
I've created a term for this, though I'm sure others have probably done so before now. I call it being "Author Blind." It's when you read your work and you see what you wanted to write rather than what is actually on the page. I often do that. Missing diction issues, and word choices, like the difference between chose and choose or no noticing you have he instead of her or the. But there are ways to overcome being "Author Blind."
I found an add on for Word Doc called Grammerly, it comes with a monthly fee, but it helps to do more than spell checking while you're editing. Of course you can ignore some of its suggestions as I did. Some things are just my style of writing, and I like them that way. Over all I found it extremely helpful, but only purchased one month, (even though it was more expensive per month than one of the longer subscriptions) I was sure I'd only use it for a month and didn't want to pay for something I wasn't actively using. I might purchase another month when I pledge to revise my novel with the NaNoWriMo website.
Usually, I have family and friends that are kind enough to proofread for me. I really do enjoy their opinions and suggestions. All of them are avid readers and I trust their opinion on my work, though I pick and choose which suggestions I will employ. I often get impatient, and edit my novel while they have it, which can lead to redundancy in editing, but oh well. I just can't wait!
I like to edit at least twice before handing something over and these tools can help me have a slightly more polished novel. I'm not saying it's perfect at this point, only that I want them to look at content rather than spelling and grammar issues. The little stuff can be so distracting.
P.S. NaNoWriMo Winner T-Shirts are now available on their website for those of you who have met the word goal! They are so cool this year!! I plan to get one soon! TTFN!
Monday, November 17, 2014
Singing in the Rain
This post is more about a miracle than anything else. I'm sure everyone has heard about the terrible drought in California, right? While we have had a few showers, none have been enough to replace the water we don't have. Many of those rainstorms were around where I live, but didn't give us more than a few minutes of sprinkles.
Well, I got up tonight and what did I hear? Rain! A steady, down pour of rain. Thank You LORD! The sound of raindrops dinging off my aluminum patio cover sent a happy warmth through my entire body. I've always been a lover of rain, and cloudy days. I hope we have more soon.
On another topic, very much related to cloudy days, is my love of books. I'm more of a book hoarder or a bibliophile. Books make me happy. And while I do enjoy the convenience of my Kindle, I love printed books. So I thought I'd share some of my favorites.
Romance:
The Dark Series by Christine Feehan (She has many other wonderful series, but I was introduced to her with this one.
The Tairen Soul (quartette) by C.W. Wilson
Young Adult:
Harry Potter 1-7 By J.K. Rowling
Wild Magic (Immortals) by Tamora Peice (She has several books all set in the same world. I love if when familiar characters pop up in the other books!)
Fantasy:
The Blue Sword by Robin McKinley
The Paper Magician by Charlie N. Holmberg
The Glass Magician by Charlie N. Holmberg
Sabriel by Garth Nix
Classics:
Jane Eyre by Charlotte Bronte
North and South by Elizabeth Gaskell
Persuacion by Jane Austen
Collection of Short Stories (any genre):
The Bloody Chamber by Angela Carter
The Short Stories of Ernest Hemingway
Well, I got up tonight and what did I hear? Rain! A steady, down pour of rain. Thank You LORD! The sound of raindrops dinging off my aluminum patio cover sent a happy warmth through my entire body. I've always been a lover of rain, and cloudy days. I hope we have more soon.
On another topic, very much related to cloudy days, is my love of books. I'm more of a book hoarder or a bibliophile. Books make me happy. And while I do enjoy the convenience of my Kindle, I love printed books. So I thought I'd share some of my favorites.
Romance:
The Dark Series by Christine Feehan (She has many other wonderful series, but I was introduced to her with this one.
The Tairen Soul (quartette) by C.W. Wilson
Young Adult:
Harry Potter 1-7 By J.K. Rowling
Wild Magic (Immortals) by Tamora Peice (She has several books all set in the same world. I love if when familiar characters pop up in the other books!)
Fantasy:
The Blue Sword by Robin McKinley
The Paper Magician by Charlie N. Holmberg
The Glass Magician by Charlie N. Holmberg
Sabriel by Garth Nix
Classics:
Jane Eyre by Charlotte Bronte
North and South by Elizabeth Gaskell
Persuacion by Jane Austen
Collection of Short Stories (any genre):
The Bloody Chamber by Angela Carter
The Short Stories of Ernest Hemingway
Week Three Of NaNoWriMo
Week Three is the start of the up hill trek to the finish. For many they have blown their word count out of the water. For others its time to get to work. The goal is to keep going. Sure we might edit out half of what we wrote during the editing period, but it's a jumping off point.
For me it holds a look at the finish line, and a whole lot of work yet to be done. I have a list of things that I want to add in from items the characters carry around with them to several scenes to help build some side character that will foreshadow some events and reappear with force.
So here's a high-five for those of you who are writing your hearts out. I hope that more than meeting word goals, or deadlines, that NaNoWriMo's enjoy the process, the community, and the creative cloud.
Write On!
For me it holds a look at the finish line, and a whole lot of work yet to be done. I have a list of things that I want to add in from items the characters carry around with them to several scenes to help build some side character that will foreshadow some events and reappear with force.
So here's a high-five for those of you who are writing your hearts out. I hope that more than meeting word goals, or deadlines, that NaNoWriMo's enjoy the process, the community, and the creative cloud.
Write On!
Monday, November 10, 2014
From Cover to Cover
Update: NaNoWriMo is in full swing and on day 9 my sister surprised me with some cover ideas for The Chronicles of Odde: The Lost Prince. I thought I'd share them with you! I am always surprised at what she can do! Thanks Sister!
They really are lovely! Thanks again, Melli!
They really are lovely! Thanks again, Melli!
Building a Fantasy World
The Chronicles of Odde takes place on a fictional world, on a continent called Odde. Building a fantasy world sounds easy, right? That's not really the case, at least not for me. It takes a lot of work, research, and rearranging to get the detail just right.
As a writer, my characters are already inhabiting their fantasy world and often I can literally see it in my minds eye, in rich and vivid detail. Problem is, my mental images, while colorful, aren't exactly architectural blueprints. That is to say, when I look at them logically, the don't always make sense.
Have you ever been in a dream, and walked through a house where the rooms switched on you, or entered some random room that didn't belong there. My ideas work something like that. When building a place, such as a castle, I have a general idea of its layout, the style in which it was built, the lives of its occupants, but the specifics are harder to iron out. That's why I draw a blueprint or a map.
Even a rough sketch can be helpful in figuring out the details of a setting. For example, I often find that I have a room that couldn't exist. While I know that one room is connected to another, when I get it on paper I sometimes find that floors don't match up, or there's an extra door down the hall that shouldn't be there. Most people might think, "why would that matter? The reader will never know." And perhaps they would be right, but as a proclaimed 'perfectionist' it comes down to a simple fact: I would know. And it drives me crazy!
I have spent hours researching castle designs, looking up map making tips, random images and names of places, both real and fictional. All in the hopes that something will trigger some creative spark to bend the piece of information to my purpose. I put my personal stamp on what I find and add it to my collection to be used at just the right spot in my story.
Unfortunately, I amass ideas quicker than I use them. Being a 'perfectionist' also means that I won't settle for something that is 'okay,' I need just the right one. Like there is such a thing... and yet I sometimes find it. Truly, the 'Aha! Perfect!' moments make the endless hours worth it.
While many readers overlook the maps and appendices authors often insert into their works, you should know that a lot of time and effort go into their creation. You don't know just how much. So next time, take a moment to appreciate that map and enjoy the world they've built for you. I know I will!
Saturday, November 8, 2014
Christmas Movies and Midnight Snacks
Update: NaNoWriMo in full swing.
Tonight has been a long night. I found myself watching Christmas Movies on Hallmark and eating snacks. I felt like eating everything in sight, and sugar was high on my list. I'm not recommending this as a way to write, but it was rather pleasant (for the most part). I must say that I didn't write as much as I usually do, and it was touch and go around the distraction of my television, but I got it done.
Sometimes you just need to push through. Speaking of which, I think several people in my household are coming down with something. There are coughs coming from several different directions, mine included.
On another hand, it's Time to Celebrate!!! Half-way to the 50,000 word goal. WOOT!!!
Word Count: 25,328!!!
Happy Dance!!
Happy NaNoWriMo, Write On!
Thursday, November 6, 2014
Another word for said
I am taking a break for novel writing to post this. I thought I needed to switch gears for a few minutes, but as I was opening the webpage I wondered what am I going to post about. I've wanted to talk more about writing, and not just status updates. I thought if only I had the words to say. And that moved to 'another word for said.' As a writer you can find yourself cutting corners on your first draft, especially if you are tired or sometimes when you are on a roll, the creative little quirks are spent on larger issues than repetitive diction. "Another word for said" is a popular handout I've seen on the internet, on sites like pinterest. It's just a list of words to use in place of said and that got me thinking about my own writing style. What are your writing quirks and bad habits?
My friend, Ali who is kind enough to proofread for me and give me her opinion of my work, has threatened bodily hard if I didn't stop using 'and' at ever turn. On one page alone, she counted 18 'and's. Another time there were nine in a paragraph; it was a rather short paragraph. I've got a bad habit of run-on sentences and I like lists. I really like lists, where 'and' comes in very handy.
So what are some ways to stop the repetitive word usage? Well, I have my trusty Thesaurus at the ready, but more often than not, I look up something in order to find that allusive word I can't get off the tip of my tongue. Not to find an alternative for more common words.
Handy charts and lists can be found all over the web. Some creative thinking, some common sense and a good proofreader are very good tools to help get away from upsetting your readers. So here is my tip of the day, look at what you are writing and try to find another word for said. Here are two lists I found on the internet for 'said' and 'look.' I'm not sure who made them or where exactly they came from, but thank you word continuous person for creating them. You have made my writing a little better.
Thank you! And don't forget my motto for NaNoWriMo: Write On!
My friend, Ali who is kind enough to proofread for me and give me her opinion of my work, has threatened bodily hard if I didn't stop using 'and' at ever turn. On one page alone, she counted 18 'and's. Another time there were nine in a paragraph; it was a rather short paragraph. I've got a bad habit of run-on sentences and I like lists. I really like lists, where 'and' comes in very handy.
So what are some ways to stop the repetitive word usage? Well, I have my trusty Thesaurus at the ready, but more often than not, I look up something in order to find that allusive word I can't get off the tip of my tongue. Not to find an alternative for more common words.
Handy charts and lists can be found all over the web. Some creative thinking, some common sense and a good proofreader are very good tools to help get away from upsetting your readers. So here is my tip of the day, look at what you are writing and try to find another word for said. Here are two lists I found on the internet for 'said' and 'look.' I'm not sure who made them or where exactly they came from, but thank you word continuous person for creating them. You have made my writing a little better.
Wednesday, November 5, 2014
Look What I found!
Not that it was missing, per say. I thought I'd share my sister's awesome cover for The Beast of the Ruin (aka My Dark Prince). The title change was after we had the proof printed, but it was really nice seeing it in print. Not just because every author wants to hold their book in their hands (yes, there is that), but also because a lot of things don't translate from word doc or website descriptions into book format. Sometimes you just need to see it.
What, you might ask. Well, like seeing the number of inches your chapter title is from the top of the page. I notice that mine was too high on the page and that I needed more room between the chapter title and my first paragraph. Or the fact that my map was too small in the front of the book. Or the texture of the paper is different than i imagined and that white paper is really very white. There was also the fact that the cover was only printed on the dust jacket and not on the literal cover of the book. These things I would not have know if I hadn't got a proof first. Now I know and can prepare for the next round. I hope to be able to afford some professional help in the form of a self-publication package from lulu.com thanks to my supporters, via my campaign at gofund.me/g4zsek or look me up under my name and "Publishing My First Book" at www.gofundme.com
As for the cover art. Well, I leave that up to the professional (and very free) help of my sister, Melanie Brown.
What, you might ask. Well, like seeing the number of inches your chapter title is from the top of the page. I notice that mine was too high on the page and that I needed more room between the chapter title and my first paragraph. Or the fact that my map was too small in the front of the book. Or the texture of the paper is different than i imagined and that white paper is really very white. There was also the fact that the cover was only printed on the dust jacket and not on the literal cover of the book. These things I would not have know if I hadn't got a proof first. Now I know and can prepare for the next round. I hope to be able to afford some professional help in the form of a self-publication package from lulu.com thanks to my supporters, via my campaign at gofund.me/g4zsek or look me up under my name and "Publishing My First Book" at www.gofundme.com
As for the cover art. Well, I leave that up to the professional (and very free) help of my sister, Melanie Brown.
Really? WOW!! She continually surprises me and blows my paltry skill with M.S. Paint out of the water. Thanks Sister!
Taking out the Trash, and other Real Life Interruptions
There are some things that you can ignore in life and some of those things at your own peril. Like taking out the trash, and taking the can to the curb. Putting it off seems a good idea, letting someone else get it is even better, but then comes that moment of utter terror at seven o-clock in the morning when you're running outside in your p.j.s to get the can out as the garbage truck stops at the house next to yours. Yes, I am that person, but I don't have to be!
I want to be the person that plans and acts, not reacts to the things in my life. I know that I can't plan for everything, I have not clairvoyant abilities, but some stuff, like garbage day, shouldn't catch me by surprise. To bring it around to the topic of this blog here is my to-do list. These are the things I need to do before I can focus on my writing and know that I won't be pulled out of my zone.
1) Take out the trash, and that also means putting away that thing I keep tripping over, or making my bed because it makes my room look instantly neater and I won't go insane and have to start cleaning everything when I should be writing.
2) Snack like a boss. Cool beverage, check. Popular children's snacks, check. All within arm reach, double check.
3) Prime the Playlist. Now, I'm a music junky, I have no genre allegiance and my song of the week can change with my mood. Right Now here is the playlist (in no particular order). Don't judge.
1) Back to Life - 3OH!3
2) Breath of Life - Florence + the Machine
3) Returner - GACKT (A Japanese Artist. I don't need to know the words to like the song.)
4) To Feel Alive - Iameve (is there a theme going with this Live/Life stuff?)
5) Radioactive - Imagine Dragons (Gotta have the beats. I'm loving Dubstep.)
6) Out Alive - Ke$ha
7) Because I'm Awesome - The Dollyrots
8) I Alone (New Edit) - Live (Classic)
9) Hysteria - Muse (Rock anthem)
10) Sunglasses at Night - Corey Hart
11) New Divide - Linkin Park
12) Let it go - Idina Menzel (Yes, its that song from FROZEN)
4) Have my reference books, sheets, handouts, and/or webpages at the ready. That includes: encyclopedias, dictionary, thesaurus, name meanings websites (I prefer www.behindthename.com), and whatever other reference you like. I have recently discovered random generating websites that spit out everything from titles to magical objects, and character weaknesses to writing prompts. They are a kick in the pants and sometimes utter genius. Plus they can help with writer's block and are good for a laugh. Bonus!
5) Get Comfortable. This can mean pulling out the p.j.s and fluffy sock or stripping down to your whatevers or even just finding the right spot in the couch (you know the one).
Once all is in place the Writing can begin in earnest. Write On!
What do you need to write? Do you have a list of things you have to do, a ceremony or pseudo-ritual to get you in the zone? Can you start cold turkey and just bust out the word count?
I want to be the person that plans and acts, not reacts to the things in my life. I know that I can't plan for everything, I have not clairvoyant abilities, but some stuff, like garbage day, shouldn't catch me by surprise. To bring it around to the topic of this blog here is my to-do list. These are the things I need to do before I can focus on my writing and know that I won't be pulled out of my zone.
1) Take out the trash, and that also means putting away that thing I keep tripping over, or making my bed because it makes my room look instantly neater and I won't go insane and have to start cleaning everything when I should be writing.
2) Snack like a boss. Cool beverage, check. Popular children's snacks, check. All within arm reach, double check.
3) Prime the Playlist. Now, I'm a music junky, I have no genre allegiance and my song of the week can change with my mood. Right Now here is the playlist (in no particular order). Don't judge.
1) Back to Life - 3OH!3
2) Breath of Life - Florence + the Machine
3) Returner - GACKT (A Japanese Artist. I don't need to know the words to like the song.)
4) To Feel Alive - Iameve (is there a theme going with this Live/Life stuff?)
5) Radioactive - Imagine Dragons (Gotta have the beats. I'm loving Dubstep.)
6) Out Alive - Ke$ha
7) Because I'm Awesome - The Dollyrots
8) I Alone (New Edit) - Live (Classic)
9) Hysteria - Muse (Rock anthem)
10) Sunglasses at Night - Corey Hart
11) New Divide - Linkin Park
12) Let it go - Idina Menzel (Yes, its that song from FROZEN)
4) Have my reference books, sheets, handouts, and/or webpages at the ready. That includes: encyclopedias, dictionary, thesaurus, name meanings websites (I prefer www.behindthename.com), and whatever other reference you like. I have recently discovered random generating websites that spit out everything from titles to magical objects, and character weaknesses to writing prompts. They are a kick in the pants and sometimes utter genius. Plus they can help with writer's block and are good for a laugh. Bonus!
5) Get Comfortable. This can mean pulling out the p.j.s and fluffy sock or stripping down to your whatevers or even just finding the right spot in the couch (you know the one).
Once all is in place the Writing can begin in earnest. Write On!
What do you need to write? Do you have a list of things you have to do, a ceremony or pseudo-ritual to get you in the zone? Can you start cold turkey and just bust out the word count?
Tuesday, November 4, 2014
If at first you don't succeed...
NaNoWriMo has taken over. I thought I would have the energy to write and edit, but that is not the case. I am having more trouble writing this novel than the previous one. The Beast of the Ruin seemed to flow onto the page with little effort from me. The next book in the series, The Lost Prince, is not so forthcoming.
I have to admit that I am not the sort who can just keep going when they meet with a bit of writer's block, though I have tried. There are several scenes, mostly dialogue, that are giving me trouble. I know what I want to happen but I can't seems to get there. More often than not I let the characters run the scene which can end up with some unexpected and wonderful things happening. It may take longer for my players to get to the next point on the map but they have always gotten there; not quite so, right now.
Unwilling to stop writing all together, I switched gears and tried writing something else. I started brainstorming which moved into revamping my outline. I'm typing up handwritten notes, and researching a few fairy tales elements. I even started this post. I keep returning to my novel, moving forward a little and returning to those trouble areas. The scenes are slowly building, yet remain unfinished. I am confident that I will get there eventually.
I often wonder how other writers deal with writer's block. I think my process is unusual. Not many people can switch between writing projects as I do. Then again, I don't know many writers personally, so I can't say for sure.
NaNoWriMo has a bunch of ideas to combat writer's block, to inspire rises in word counts, and support for your writing process. The best advise I have found is to just keep writing. If we stop, if we give up, then we will never finish.
Good Luck to my fellow writers participating this year. Write On!
I have to admit that I am not the sort who can just keep going when they meet with a bit of writer's block, though I have tried. There are several scenes, mostly dialogue, that are giving me trouble. I know what I want to happen but I can't seems to get there. More often than not I let the characters run the scene which can end up with some unexpected and wonderful things happening. It may take longer for my players to get to the next point on the map but they have always gotten there; not quite so, right now.
Unwilling to stop writing all together, I switched gears and tried writing something else. I started brainstorming which moved into revamping my outline. I'm typing up handwritten notes, and researching a few fairy tales elements. I even started this post. I keep returning to my novel, moving forward a little and returning to those trouble areas. The scenes are slowly building, yet remain unfinished. I am confident that I will get there eventually.
I often wonder how other writers deal with writer's block. I think my process is unusual. Not many people can switch between writing projects as I do. Then again, I don't know many writers personally, so I can't say for sure.
NaNoWriMo has a bunch of ideas to combat writer's block, to inspire rises in word counts, and support for your writing process. The best advise I have found is to just keep writing. If we stop, if we give up, then we will never finish.
Good Luck to my fellow writers participating this year. Write On!
Sunday, November 2, 2014
And so it begins... NaNoWriMo
November 1st is the official start of Nation Novel Writing Month. To follow is a crazy month of writing and late night awesomeness. Last year I wrote The Beast of The Ruin, the first book in the Chronicles of Odde series. This year I am working on book too, The Lost Prince. I have to admit that I was a bit of a recluse for the month and my sister, who has promised to participate with me this year, made me promise not to be the smelly, computer obsessed writer I was last year. She said I only came out to eat and use the bathroom, and truthfully I usually took my food back into my room with me. She wouldn't agree to be my writing buddy until I promised and so I gave in and promised her to shower and take time out of writing so she could see me with her own eyeballs.
II have to admit that I'm a bit of an over achiever. Always had been. I aim for between two to three thousand words a day, which dramatically reduce the days needed to reach the site goal of fifty thousand words. I, of course, surpassed that number and finished the complete rough draft of my novel in a little over two weeks. Yes, this is part bragging and partially an explanation for my siblings concern. This year has similar goals, but a lot more distractions and responsibilities. Right now I am also working on this blog, which I don't believe anyone but me is reading. It's more a lesson in self-discipline than anything else. I am proving something to myself, that I can stick to something for an extended period of time. I can fulfill my goal of writing every day, and perhaps amuse someone else along the way.
Switching gears, I wanted to talk a bit about my writing processes. With the first book my process was very "fly by the seat of my pants," meaning I didn't really plan anything. The first day I wrote an outline and even brainstormed a bit for the series as a whole, but I didn't plan anything out in detail. In fact, a lot of the story's plot was developed as I worked at my part-time job. In the middle of cleaning, mostly during the monotony of vacuuming, I'd think about the next plot point and come up with the tasks my heroine would be facing. This year is a bit different.
Since this is the second book in a series I am thinking more about connecting the novels, what character will reappear, what themes tie the novels together, and building the world of Odde! I'm also more interested in character development than I was before. I have several outlines and have been brainstorming for weeks before the month started. Overall, I am more organized and have more written down ahead of time, but there are still things that will be worked out during the writing processes. That's when the magic happens!!
I love how things unfold as I write. I start out knowing that my character has to get from point a to point b, but the how or the why sometimes surprises even me.
Good luck to my fellow Wrimos! Write on!
II have to admit that I'm a bit of an over achiever. Always had been. I aim for between two to three thousand words a day, which dramatically reduce the days needed to reach the site goal of fifty thousand words. I, of course, surpassed that number and finished the complete rough draft of my novel in a little over two weeks. Yes, this is part bragging and partially an explanation for my siblings concern. This year has similar goals, but a lot more distractions and responsibilities. Right now I am also working on this blog, which I don't believe anyone but me is reading. It's more a lesson in self-discipline than anything else. I am proving something to myself, that I can stick to something for an extended period of time. I can fulfill my goal of writing every day, and perhaps amuse someone else along the way.
Switching gears, I wanted to talk a bit about my writing processes. With the first book my process was very "fly by the seat of my pants," meaning I didn't really plan anything. The first day I wrote an outline and even brainstormed a bit for the series as a whole, but I didn't plan anything out in detail. In fact, a lot of the story's plot was developed as I worked at my part-time job. In the middle of cleaning, mostly during the monotony of vacuuming, I'd think about the next plot point and come up with the tasks my heroine would be facing. This year is a bit different.
Since this is the second book in a series I am thinking more about connecting the novels, what character will reappear, what themes tie the novels together, and building the world of Odde! I'm also more interested in character development than I was before. I have several outlines and have been brainstorming for weeks before the month started. Overall, I am more organized and have more written down ahead of time, but there are still things that will be worked out during the writing processes. That's when the magic happens!!
I love how things unfold as I write. I start out knowing that my character has to get from point a to point b, but the how or the why sometimes surprises even me.
Good luck to my fellow Wrimos! Write on!
Friday, October 31, 2014
The Chronicles of Odde Ideas
Here are some inspirational images for the cover of my next book, The Lost Prince. It's a working title, and may change later. (This is my National Novel Writing Month project (NaNoWriMo).)
My sister and I have the idea of using something along these lines as the cover. The idea of emerging out of the darkness has a lot of metaphorical meanings, but most directly refers to one of the tasks set before the book's Heroine, Kelly Williams. She is asked to solve the riddle of the labyrinth.
My sister and I have the idea of using something along these lines as the cover. The idea of emerging out of the darkness has a lot of metaphorical meanings, but most directly refers to one of the tasks set before the book's Heroine, Kelly Williams. She is asked to solve the riddle of the labyrinth.
Such a character... (Spoiler Alert)
Building a character is a complicated process. I don't know about other writers but I like using character sheets. My character sheets are an amalgamation of several others I've looked up on the internet. They have the usual information, like physical traits and personality, but it also has a lot of back history. Family connections, dreams, goals, disappointments, personal quirks and pet-peeves. Some things I write down never end up in my writing, but they can explain how my character will react in certain situations.
For example, Soran Folkern in my novel, The Beast of the Ruin.
Soran was a Prince of an old Kingdom, Folkerth. In his youth, he was darkly handsome, charming, but a dutiful son. The court loved him and especially the women there. Soran loved them in return, but he wasn't a playboy and the hearts he left behind were never broken, but sometimes a little too clingy. He was cursed by Zula Milberga, Odde's most dangerous Sorceress. The smell of pinroses, Zula's favorite perfume, still made Soran ill centuries after first seeing the Sorceress flaunt her beauty in his father's court.
The curse he'd born for over a century was taking it's toll on his humanity. His forced seclusion was both for his sanity and the safety of the women around him. A feminine presence was enough to stir the hunger of the curse, and so he avoided them like the plague and yet he couldn't live without them.
Zula had cursed him that night, under the full moon with the music of the summer dance drifting through the lit gardens, "Since you seem to love the paltry affections and infatuations these frivolous woman have for you, from this moment forward you will live off their love at the cost of their lives. A monster who consumes the very blood of their affectionate hearts. Any woman who looks on you will surely love you, and as soon as they admit that love, they will die in your arms." He remembered as she paused a moment for affect, "Since, my love was not enough, this seems a fitting punishment. But I'm not heartless, this curse will be broken when a woman can withstand your looks for a year and a day. I doubt there is a woman born in this world that wouldn't fall in love with you on sight." She laughed cruelly and left in a flash of red lightning. Soran often wondered if she knew what the magic she unleashed had done to him as the memory still haunted his dreams.
None of these facts appeared in the story, but hints are here and there about Soran's past.
I am always looking for ways to improve my characters and process. What attributes or other facts would you add to your character sheets?
For example, Soran Folkern in my novel, The Beast of the Ruin.
Soran was a Prince of an old Kingdom, Folkerth. In his youth, he was darkly handsome, charming, but a dutiful son. The court loved him and especially the women there. Soran loved them in return, but he wasn't a playboy and the hearts he left behind were never broken, but sometimes a little too clingy. He was cursed by Zula Milberga, Odde's most dangerous Sorceress. The smell of pinroses, Zula's favorite perfume, still made Soran ill centuries after first seeing the Sorceress flaunt her beauty in his father's court.
The curse he'd born for over a century was taking it's toll on his humanity. His forced seclusion was both for his sanity and the safety of the women around him. A feminine presence was enough to stir the hunger of the curse, and so he avoided them like the plague and yet he couldn't live without them.
Zula had cursed him that night, under the full moon with the music of the summer dance drifting through the lit gardens, "Since you seem to love the paltry affections and infatuations these frivolous woman have for you, from this moment forward you will live off their love at the cost of their lives. A monster who consumes the very blood of their affectionate hearts. Any woman who looks on you will surely love you, and as soon as they admit that love, they will die in your arms." He remembered as she paused a moment for affect, "Since, my love was not enough, this seems a fitting punishment. But I'm not heartless, this curse will be broken when a woman can withstand your looks for a year and a day. I doubt there is a woman born in this world that wouldn't fall in love with you on sight." She laughed cruelly and left in a flash of red lightning. Soran often wondered if she knew what the magic she unleashed had done to him as the memory still haunted his dreams.
None of these facts appeared in the story, but hints are here and there about Soran's past.
I am always looking for ways to improve my characters and process. What attributes or other facts would you add to your character sheets?
Thursday, October 30, 2014
Self-Publishing vs. Traditional Publishing
Traditional or Self-publishing? That is the question. For someone like me, Self-publishing looks like the holy grail. It's fast, convenient and the profit looks good on paper, up to 80% of profits end up in my pocket. It's also a lot of work, with no back up, and if you want to use professional services it can be a real chunk of change up front. Depending on the package it can be thousands of dollars out of pocket. Not to mention having to pay for the actual books.
On the other hand, it can take years and countless rejections before an author is published through traditional means. If or when you are picked up, the publishing company keeps a very large portion of your profits, but they also have a great national and even international reach. The company takes care of everything, from editing, publicity, and distribution while self-publishing is trying to catch up to traditional publishing companies. Now they offer more complete distribution through amazon and formatting for e-readers, to help authors reach more people.
It is not unheard of for a few writers to transition from self-publishing to traditional. There seems to be the opinion that traditional is better. More than prestige, the draw of traditional publishing companies is all that authors hope for, but many professionals warn to read the contact's fine print. Authors often have grand intentions, but most of us don't know the financials of the path we've chosen. We all can't be as rich as J.K. Rowling, and especially not right off the bat. The best I hope for is enough to live on, and maybe traveling for book signings.
So my self-publishing journey is just beginning. Thanks to there partnership with NaNoWriMo last year I got a proof copy of my novel from www.lulu.com and it is with them that I plan to publish my book.
As you know I've been editing my novel (several drafts since it was first penned), and I hope to be finished by the first of the year. If you'd like to support me, I have a campaingne going at
www.gofund.me/g4zsek
Thank you for your support & thanks for reading. Here's an older pic of the cover made by my very talented sister, Melanie Brown.
On the other hand, it can take years and countless rejections before an author is published through traditional means. If or when you are picked up, the publishing company keeps a very large portion of your profits, but they also have a great national and even international reach. The company takes care of everything, from editing, publicity, and distribution while self-publishing is trying to catch up to traditional publishing companies. Now they offer more complete distribution through amazon and formatting for e-readers, to help authors reach more people.
It is not unheard of for a few writers to transition from self-publishing to traditional. There seems to be the opinion that traditional is better. More than prestige, the draw of traditional publishing companies is all that authors hope for, but many professionals warn to read the contact's fine print. Authors often have grand intentions, but most of us don't know the financials of the path we've chosen. We all can't be as rich as J.K. Rowling, and especially not right off the bat. The best I hope for is enough to live on, and maybe traveling for book signings.
So my self-publishing journey is just beginning. Thanks to there partnership with NaNoWriMo last year I got a proof copy of my novel from www.lulu.com and it is with them that I plan to publish my book.
As you know I've been editing my novel (several drafts since it was first penned), and I hope to be finished by the first of the year. If you'd like to support me, I have a campaingne going at
www.gofund.me/g4zsek
Thank you for your support & thanks for reading. Here's an older pic of the cover made by my very talented sister, Melanie Brown.
Wednesday, October 29, 2014
The Plans of Mice and Men...
Or in this case, Writers and Women. Oh, dear. I sometimes forget that
life doesn't go according to my plans. In fact, it seems the more I
plan the more my life goes off track. Take this blog for instance. I
planned to write something every night, not anything life changing, but
just a post as a way of flexing my self discipline. Life happened. So
there was a bump in the road and now I'm back on track.
I feel a plethora of cliches drifting about at the corners of my consciousness. I am ignoring them. (You're welcome, by the way.)
On to the planned topic. My Novel.
The Chronicles of Odde: The Beast of the Ruin.
Here is the synopsis for the novel. Expect an excerpt to be posted soon. Until then...
Young women are finding themselves transported to a world of magic, the many Kingdoms of Odde, where princes fall under magical spells and princess frolic about the country side and occasionally are eaten by dragons. How will these modern young women cope when fairy tales become reality? And one must remember, not all tales end with happily-ever-after.
Abagail's first glance at the rolling hills of Odde was through the brackets of iron bars on her way to be sold as a slave to the underbelly of the upper class in the port city of Knaverly. It seemed she wasn't the only one snatched off the street, though she could tell her companions weren't from her suburbs, more like a big-budget remake of anything Rodgers and Hammerstein. But when Peter, a young innkeeper, spends all of his coin to purchase Abbey from the clutches of a nasty under-lord, she suddenly finds herself safe again. Peter is that brawny sort of handsome, big and kind, and in love with the Miller's pretty daughter, Milly. Abbey is happy to work at the inn for room and board and help Peter any way she can. She knows she could never repay his kindness. Not to mention the fact that she has nowhere else to go. The Wolf's Tooth Inn, is not too far from the bustling city, and is a good place to pick up information, perhaps even to find a way home.
Months pass to little avail while Abigail learns the ins and outs of running The Wolf's Tooth. She's smart, and a bit crafty, in both senses of the word. She picks up on things quickly enough for Peter to wonder at her protests. With Milly's help and some creative upgrades the Inn is thriving, until a darkness settles over the land, threatening Abbey's safety and peace of mind.
Whispers float through the town. Lights have been seen in the towers of a cursed and abandoned castle, the townsfolk call the Ruin. The time of the Naming has come again.
It has been nearly two decades since the last Naming; a lottery of the women in the village, those unmarried and of a certain age. One unlucky maiden is chosen to be served up to the Beast of the Ruin. When Milly's name is chosen Abbey offers to go in her stead. Left tied to a stack at the gates of the Ruin, Abbey wonders if she has but moments to live, until an old man and a boy come out of the shadowy depth and claim her in the name of the Beast.
What future does the Ruin hold for her? A gruesome death by teeth and claws? A magical servitude or something more hopeful?
I feel a plethora of cliches drifting about at the corners of my consciousness. I am ignoring them. (You're welcome, by the way.)
On to the planned topic. My Novel.
The Chronicles of Odde: The Beast of the Ruin.
Here is the synopsis for the novel. Expect an excerpt to be posted soon. Until then...
Young women are finding themselves transported to a world of magic, the many Kingdoms of Odde, where princes fall under magical spells and princess frolic about the country side and occasionally are eaten by dragons. How will these modern young women cope when fairy tales become reality? And one must remember, not all tales end with happily-ever-after.
Abagail's first glance at the rolling hills of Odde was through the brackets of iron bars on her way to be sold as a slave to the underbelly of the upper class in the port city of Knaverly. It seemed she wasn't the only one snatched off the street, though she could tell her companions weren't from her suburbs, more like a big-budget remake of anything Rodgers and Hammerstein. But when Peter, a young innkeeper, spends all of his coin to purchase Abbey from the clutches of a nasty under-lord, she suddenly finds herself safe again. Peter is that brawny sort of handsome, big and kind, and in love with the Miller's pretty daughter, Milly. Abbey is happy to work at the inn for room and board and help Peter any way she can. She knows she could never repay his kindness. Not to mention the fact that she has nowhere else to go. The Wolf's Tooth Inn, is not too far from the bustling city, and is a good place to pick up information, perhaps even to find a way home.
Months pass to little avail while Abigail learns the ins and outs of running The Wolf's Tooth. She's smart, and a bit crafty, in both senses of the word. She picks up on things quickly enough for Peter to wonder at her protests. With Milly's help and some creative upgrades the Inn is thriving, until a darkness settles over the land, threatening Abbey's safety and peace of mind.
Whispers float through the town. Lights have been seen in the towers of a cursed and abandoned castle, the townsfolk call the Ruin. The time of the Naming has come again.
It has been nearly two decades since the last Naming; a lottery of the women in the village, those unmarried and of a certain age. One unlucky maiden is chosen to be served up to the Beast of the Ruin. When Milly's name is chosen Abbey offers to go in her stead. Left tied to a stack at the gates of the Ruin, Abbey wonders if she has but moments to live, until an old man and a boy come out of the shadowy depth and claim her in the name of the Beast.
What future does the Ruin hold for her? A gruesome death by teeth and claws? A magical servitude or something more hopeful?
Thursday, October 23, 2014
Wednesday, October 22, 2014
NaNoWriMo is Just Around the Corner
November is National Novel Writing Month. The official website www.nanowrimo.org has everything you need to know about participating nationally or locally. It's 30 days and a goal of 50,000 words. (Join the winners circle.) They are great with motivation for all levels and ages of writers. Donations and/or merchandise help support the movement. Writers all over the world are gearing up for the writing extravaganza. Myself included. While the website provides any number of prompts and ideas to get writing, I have my own list of items to help me brainstorm. Plot outlines, character worksheets, synopsis, and lots of internet searches. Lots and lots of searches.
What do you do to plan for your writing projects? What are your best brainstorming ideas?
What do you do to plan for your writing projects? What are your best brainstorming ideas?
It's a very good place to start...
Ink and Paper. Stories. Books. Since I first learned to read, I've had a love of books. Some might call me a bibliophile. That love has translated into the dream of publishing a volume of my own. My dream is closer than ever. This blog is to help track my journey towards publication, and to inspire other writers who are in the verbal trenches. Expect posts about my inspirations, my writing resources and sneak peeks at what I'm working on.
More to come soon. Thanks for Reading.
More to come soon. Thanks for Reading.
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